Comments on: The Cabinet Makers Chapter 1 http://blog.scribblepool.co.uk/2009/05/the-cabinet-makers/ Scribes On Merseyside Mon, 02 Nov 2009 16:40:57 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Cyran http://blog.scribblepool.co.uk/2009/05/the-cabinet-makers/comment-page-1/#comment-74 Cyran Sun, 10 May 2009 23:40:22 +0000 http://blog.scribblepool.co.uk/?p=59#comment-74 The scene setting clearly works as I felt as though I knew exactly where I was supposed to be. And who I was with. And you've managed to get a lot of history and feeling into just a few words, neatly done :) My only niggle is with the dialogue of Mr Foster, it reads a little cliche'd The scene setting clearly works as I felt as though I knew exactly where I was supposed to be. And who I was with. And you’ve managed to get a lot of history and feeling into just a few words, neatly done :)

My only niggle is with the dialogue of Mr Foster, it reads a little cliche’d

]]> By: Robbe Law http://blog.scribblepool.co.uk/2009/05/the-cabinet-makers/comment-page-1/#comment-53 Robbe Law Sat, 09 May 2009 18:52:54 +0000 http://blog.scribblepool.co.uk/?p=59#comment-53 :) I simply don't agree that it's hard to say anything ... after all this is chapter 1 ..... :) I simply don’t agree that it’s hard to say anything … after all this is chapter 1 …..

]]> By: Dawn http://blog.scribblepool.co.uk/2009/05/the-cabinet-makers/comment-page-1/#comment-51 Dawn Sat, 09 May 2009 15:40:46 +0000 http://blog.scribblepool.co.uk/?p=59#comment-51 I agree a synopsis is a good ideal. D I agree a synopsis is a good ideal.

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]]> By: cyran http://blog.scribblepool.co.uk/2009/05/the-cabinet-makers/comment-page-1/#comment-35 cyran Fri, 08 May 2009 15:49:51 +0000 http://blog.scribblepool.co.uk/?p=59#comment-35 Robbe, Without knowing what the story is about, it's hard to say anything. Synopsis? Robbe,
Without knowing what the story is about, it’s hard to say anything.
Synopsis?

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